donderdag 19 april 2012

article 4: boy, seven, dies playing football


Boy, seven, dies playing football
Football is a sport that a lot of Young kids love, especially boys. The game is always a bit harsh , but it is most of the time very safe. Ciaran Geddes was playing football with his friends at his school when he suddenly collapsed. It was a moment that just happened and no one had seen this coming. He went to the hospital in Warrington and a few hours later he passed away. It is a big mystery how this could happen. His family is very sad and they react to the media that Carian was a lovely kid who had a big passion for football. The doctors will do more research about the causing of the kids death.

I think this article is very sad. This young kid who had a whole life in front of him dies when he is playing his favorite sport. The kid loved to play football and then something just happened what caused his death. I also think it is very strange that no one really knows what exactly happened and that doctors aren’t sure about the causing. I hope that research will figure out what exactly happened to this young boy. On this way his family also gets a little bit more rest. 

article 3: men jailed for life for Thusa Kamaleswaran shop shooting


Men jailed for life for Thusha Kamaleswaran shop shooting
A little girl was walking in a shop when something terrible happened to her. Three man were shooting in this shop, because their rival was there and he had to be killed. Their bullets did not hit the rival, but instead the little girl and an older man who was 35 years old. The girl named Thusa always wanted to become a dancer , but she is paralyzed for the rest of her life. The mother of Thusa reacts in shock and she can not say a lot about this accident. The three men did not show any remorse to the family of this girl. The judge concluded that the shooter is going to be in jail for about 17 years and the other two 14 years.

I think it is terrible what happened over here. A shop should always be a very safe place to be for everyone. I think it is very sad what happened to the girl , all her dreams are over at this moment and this should not be this way. I also think it is really childish of the three men that they will kill a rival in a shop. There are always more people in a shop , so it was predictable that someone else was going to be hit. That they don’t show any remorse is very disrespectful. 

donderdag 12 april 2012

article 2: Wrong Direction


Wrong Direction
Zayn and Louis get lost searching for Rihanna in Oz

The very popular British band One Direction was visiting Australia when they heard that Rihanna was in the same city as they were.  Zayn and Louis wanted to see her so badly that they left the Hotel at 8 in the morning without any security. They did not know the city and they got lost very quickly. They also did not know where the premiere from Rihanna’s new movie would take place. In the main time another band member from One Direction was eating his toast, but after one bite he had enough of it. That piece of toast is now on ebay and for sale for 65.000 pounds.


I think this article is very funny to read. One Direction is very famous now in the UK, because of the television show Britain’s got talent. They had 3rd place in this competition. Rihanna is a very big star and Zayn and Louis just wanted to meet her in Australia. I think it is very unsafe that they left without any security. I think you could expect to get lost in such a big city and especially when you do not know the place at all.  The toast Neill was eating is not worth a lot of money, which I think is ridicules. 

Article 1 : Overnight discharges from NHS hospitals to be examined


Overnight discharges from NHS hospitals to be examined

After a lot of research people in the UK found out that a lot of people get discharged in the hospitals in the middle of the night between 23.00 and 6.00. The BBC asked 170 NHS hospitals if this was true , but only 100 responded. They discharge a lot of people in the night , because they need to free up beds. Sir Bruce thinks this is crazy and he says people only need to be discharged when it is safe and responsible. People who have overcome this can send a letter or call to The Patients Association.

I think it is ridicules that people who are laying in the hospital have to be discharged in the middle of the night. It is not safe for that person to go home around that time. I do understand that hospitals need to free up beds, but not on this way. We have to think about the importance from the patient. It’s  better to send them home early in the morning around 8 o clock instead of the night.